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Between the Lines chap1pg5 by Mekari Between the Lines chap1pg5 by Mekari
New and Improved!

Between the Lines
Chapter 1: Byberry
Page 5
Created by: Mekari
Artist: Mekari
Edited by: Dana

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:iconpiro-kira:
Piro-kira Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2011
i want that bear
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:icontenshiyasha:
Tenshiyasha Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009
Subtlety and scope are important in writing. Try not to have your characters speak in terms that are too wide, or explain thier feelings in a way that is analytical, unless thier diction is suited to it, and the tone meshes well.

Also, it would behoove you to provide a link for successive pages when the next one is completed.
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:iconmekari:
Mekari Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009   Digital Artist
Thanks, i'll keep that in mind.
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:icontenshiyasha:
Tenshiyasha Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009
Glad to hear it.
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:iconmamacockroach:
MamaCockroach Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I like the way you color in your pages.What do you use?
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:iconmekari:
Mekari Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2009   Digital Artist
photoshop 7.0
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:iconmamacockroach:
MamaCockroach Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I looks like oil pastels^^...
this is not to be insulting, I just
like the look ^^;
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:iconmychemforme:
MyChemForMe Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2008
i really like the third pic, with them in profile =3= really nice
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:iconroxio41-50:
Roxio41-50 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2007
This part is almost exactly like the original. Perhaps that's what you're going for.
You only said you were adding more information. I suppose the plot is to remain unchanged.
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:iconmekari:
Mekari Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2007   Digital Artist
yep, almost exactly lol
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