You'll also notice that there has been slight dialouge changes, I think this needed to be done on some pages to emphasize the characters more. I think the art has taken a major upturn and flows rather nicely on this page, I especially love panel 5.
Again you'll still be able to view the older version on the website.
Between the Lines
Chapter 1: Byberry
Creation, art, and story by: Morgan "Mekari" Potts
Edited by: Dana Winsor
Tools: Wacom tablet, Photoshop CS3
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